You probably won’t like this…

...it isn't very sentimental. At least I don't think so. You were possibly expecting something flowery that rhymed... Unless you were expecting something way more conceptual. In which case, this is too self-involved... Like, what are you even getting out of this? TBH I'm not sure how you got this far... It doesn't even end…

BAD cODE

Love interest as Romantic Metaphor (RM) 1.1 Reinforcement of RM 1.1 to ingratiate reader and establish structure Narrator's relationship to RM 1.1 to establish point of view (POV) Love interest as RM 1.2 Extension of RM 1.2 to develop Wider Metaphor (WM) 1 Narrator's relationship to RM 1.2 to structurally emphasise POV Love interest as…

What this is not

This is not a wonderful memory: A crash of blue and gold, best friends' voices, and smells of things people who once loved you lost long ago...